eye - damn your structure was whack - DEFINE YA LINES SON
that was vERY hard to read ya know

that verse itself was ok tho, these were ok:-

Yo im here to beat cats and put the Dog out/
This home-made gangsta' about to stop foamin and begin to spit the blood out/
couse Chi-wa-was wit no bark get hit with Mexican drop kicks/
I'll borito your ass with a newspaper for trying to learn new tricks/
and I've seen you spit, Dog aint about shit/
Im still wipin' the blood off his computer screen from the last time he got his ass whipped/

very average tho, lil to no wordplay

DOg - stucture was fine, easy to read i like this

U took a crash course in rap...and crashed the bars/
The structure u gots wack...but its a shame u are what you are/

very nice

We could've been chums Eye but u think u fly for a white guy/
Well ima have to introduce you to a new way to die/

so was this

v/ mad dog

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