Yo im here to beat cats and put the Dog out/ This home-made gangsta' about to stop foamin and begin to spit the blood out/ couse Chi-wa-was wit no bark get hit with Mexican drop kicks/ I'll borito your ass with a newspaper for trying

^^ where do the lines end...decent...but i don't like the structure


This guy has got a hidden eyedentity...im sure he's only eight/
Coz that aint spittin dawg i'd say that was more premeture ejactulate/

^^ better structure...good punch

my punchlines, 5 mins redtime, I'll have you makin Head-Lines/ U can't Merk the god of Murcury, I was born from ash/ My nutt on your girls chest is more entertain' then a soccer team in a plane crash/

^^^ decent...but its not hitting hard

We could've been chums Eye but u think u fly for a white guy/
Well ima have to introduce you to a new way to die/
U knew losin to me would make front page on the NY times/
Gotta thank u ur right

^^^ decent closer...not hard hitting..but at least its aimed at him


Vote: Mad Dog...better structure..punches