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Old 05-22-04, 05:42 AM   #16
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Battlin' Me Was Like Leavin' LD They Both Big Mistakes-
Lyrically Slaughter You Have Ur face onfront of A Milk Carton Display-

^^^ been done before...but it's good

Brutally Merk And Demolish This Kid's Men Leave King..Solo-
Like "Bow Wow" In "like Mike" You All Fake You Aint No-Pro-

^^ decent

Like An Ace In Crazy Eights Da King Is Gettin Over Powered'-
Get Ripped And Devoured..Spit Time Bombs..So You Got 24 Hours

^^ decent...i'm not so sure talking about ripping him throughout your verse is an effective punch...

28/40

decent verse though dawg


Ure crew never succeeding cuz u the leader, and losses ure conceding
Here’s a tip, flip upside-down ure roster let CREAM do the leading

^^ Clever

Are you a sick MC??? NO! U got ure name for continuously killin boyz
Standin tall holdin ure Action Man, guess u still rollin with killah toyz *


Decent closer


Vote: SOLO...way more complexity in wordplay/metas

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