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Old 05-22-04, 09:47 AM   #21
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From: Archer,Florida
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HERE'S MY OPINION

PLUSTWO: U LACKED PUNCHES, AND 2 B TRUTHFUL, IN WASNT FEELIN YA VERSE. U HAD GOOD FLOW, SYLLABLES HIITIN ON POINT, YA RHYME SCHEME WAS HORRIBLE, AND STRUCTURE WAS ANOTHER STORY,,,>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.............. YOU NEED TO GET TO WORK AND KEEP PRACTICIN.

BLACKSMITH: THIS WAS NO REAL COMP. DUDE. UR WORD PLAY WAS XCELLENT. IT REALLY STOOD OUT FROM UR OPPONENT. UR PUCHES WAS DECENT, BUT NOT SPECTACULAR

BLACK'S VERSE--- BETTA THAN ALL OF PLUSTWO BARS:
get battered n baked man youll get slayed..you run at the end like rap songs on fade

MY V/ BLACKSMITH