Are You Fucking Joking? HArd Hits? I've seen harder hits at pillow fights! Damn Playa.

Reddot you had ok sstructure and one weak punch. WEAK FLOW AND PUNCHES GET SUM PERSONALLS DAMMIT.

Balla YOu jsut sucked nutz alltogther. Liek 3 word lines. Generic and stor baught. YOu prolly wrote them at recess.

And WHitedice you are from his hometown, Ya might want to explain more if ya don't want to get called on Dick Ridin

Reddot-3/10
Blla-1/10

Aiight Peace adn Props Return da favor in ma sig

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