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Old 05-22-04, 01:32 PM   #18
Beyond Logic
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lyrical villian got this battle:
Hoe...Chill cuz im a rhymin professional//
Last time i went to church I saw a dude fuckin you in the confessional//
You ate my ass like this stand was concessional//
The fact is you couldn't stand up to CALI less you had a correctional//

those were ya strongest lines but still weren't all that appealing to me. you rhymed them, thats about it. both verses were lacking creativity n metaphors.
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