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Old 05-22-04, 03:27 PM   #1
Know-Gimix
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Reword ya ‘Verbage-Bitch’, U only like holdin’ mics coz it reminds u of ‘JERKIN-DICKKS’//
I’ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya “iN”-“SIGHT” aint WORTH-A-“SHIT”!!//

Serious use of wordplay to construct a nice opening bar and punchline... Your verse was definately correct... You came harder than I usually see in battles so Ima have to give you an 8 outta 10... Good wordplay- decent structure and some funny punches..
I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents)
‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!- My fav bar.....from you.

and then there awas nsight--

WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..-
Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner..- this was ur first really nice punch in the verse... You had a good flow in this and it made your punches almost an afterthought... I really enjoyed your verse and the ending bar was a good closer... This was a close battle-- real hard to choose a winner here but Ima have to go with... N-Sight... He had more personal punchlines... and I really just felt the flow-- I thought Tay-G was gonna win until half way through your verse when it just became apparent that you wasn't having it... Good battle- Vote Nsight.
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