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Old 05-22-04, 04:00 PM   #19
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Yo its battles like this that make me wanna read both yalls shit more good battle i mean it...shit was good......SinCity..nice word play and vocab. the best line was

"I?l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin? ?SENSE? of sellin Brain is ?Barely-An-OCCUPATION?// (cents)
?Stop-Playin?, Ya Asshole?s ?Filled With More MATES? than ?AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS?!!!//
^^thats some dope shit

Worst Line:"Reword ya ?Verbage-Bitch?, U only like holdin? mics coz it reminds u of ?JERKIN-DICKKS?//
I?ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya ?iN?-?SIGHT? aint WORTH-A-?SHIT?!!
^^even its the worst line its still dope
Advise try to make it flow better dats bout it.

N-Sight's best line:"Faggot, u 'force shit' like ur constipated..you're constantly hated..-
Not because your plots are great..but because you're drops are played"
^^nice word play wit dat shit...

Worst Line:"WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..-
Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner."\
^^it didnt relate at all but it was still a aaight line.

im gonna vote for sincity cause his shit was too nice to just not like it..N-Sight try to use better words and make it relate better.

V:SinCity

I droped one for you now you do the same for me...its on the first page
LyricleSolja Vs. Cinco
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