Ay im new in this place. I see some of yaw round here got some nice ryhmes. Tell me what u think of mine.

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Yo, ain't no challenge/ ill burn all ya party
Clip toss ya boy/ then pull out my shotty
young pup boy/ just stepped in the lobby
finger twitchin crazed/ ready to drop somebody
Flipped and twisted/ already cocked my flows again
left for a while/ but ready to drop my bows again
only nig in here who's gonna earn a perfect ten
Get my foot in the door/ and own ya bitches then......
let ya kno you fuckin with a nigga with the realest touch
punish any nig who ain't had enough
let ya kno how it feels to get grind to dust/ and then.....
Bring it back around and do it again