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Old 05-22-04, 07:57 PM   #12
Lyriclesolja
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aaight yall this was a very weak battle but it was pretty much even..

Fine Mind-u have elavate up a level since your last battle i see, but you still need to learn, try to end every sentence wit a rhymin word and dont just use 2 words expand your vocabulary and pick up a dictionary and keep practicin.

Phis.-your verse was a little better than fine mind's, try not to make your lines so long and even them out, and work on your vocab. try to use more than 2 rhymin words....
and the biggest problem i had wit yours was that you said "your verse didnt rhyme so i didnt come that hard"<<fuck that alwase come hard so you can be sure of the KO cause even now fine mind might get some votes..

So saying that i vote for Phis.

aaight i did an honest vote for yall now PLEASE return the favor on my battle..
its on the second page its LyricleSolja Vs. Cinco

Peayce
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