aaight good battle..
Lyricle-try to use more than 2 rhymin words and expand your vocab. and go to the emergency center to learn some new shit aaight cause it would be nice to see one person other than me usin more that 2 words to rhyme wit..
Graphex-nice verse it was strong at first then in the middle it got a little weak but you finished strong...and you also need to expand your vocab. and try to add more personals other than that it was all good.
Im goin for Graphex on dis one..
PLEASE return the favor and help me KO this foo...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124769
Peayce