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Old 05-22-04, 08:58 PM   #14
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Damn man aaight..

Balla-first thing expand you vocab. use more than two rhymin words
second make your sentences longer you will never win spittin that small shit and it will be surprising if you dont get KO'd.

REDDOT-your verse was alot nicer than his but next time use some personals and more than 2 rhymin words aaight???

V/Reddot

return tha fava http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123696<<this one and the one at the bottom on my signature
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