aaight ..

RedDot-try to make you sentences a lil longer cause i could almost predict what was coming next and take a lesson from DON how he used more that 2 rhymin words.

Don-nice work on tha vocab. but you still need some work on your punches and structure but it was an all around aaight verse..

so i vote for/ Don

hit me back honestly...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123696
and tha one on my signature.

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