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Old 05-22-04, 11:12 PM   #10
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Looch:

Basic, U didnt put alot of efford into this but i have to say you had betta punches and your structure was easier to read some personals could be betta. Elevate.

Tox:

Streeeeeeeeeeeeeetched as fuck your punches were forced, some were aight, u had betta rhyme sheme but damn do something about that structure.....Elevate.


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