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Old 05-22-04, 11:35 PM   #11
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E Looch - damn good spit...seen better from you....but ur meta's are my fav parts of your verses....they are very creative....good punches in here....no personals so work on that....awesome meta's....ur last two bars were fuckin insane....but a lil bit over mediocre verse from you....give it a 7/10....

Toxic - okay...well first off....ur shit was stretched....fix that....ur structure is horrible...hot multi's....but they dont win the battles....only a couple good punches....nice closer....but ur verse was so stretched....give it a 4/10.....fix ya structure man....

These two bars killed it :
Son U Ill? Hell Thats Like Sayin Satanic Writins In Eden Ya Scripts Will Never Reign
Son I'll Inject Ya Own Cereal In Ya Arms So U Know That Ya Lifes In Vein
His Sexuality Is Like Question Marks Thinkin & Drivin He Really Not Sure Which Way To Go
Like Condoms Wit Lungs His Raps Are Known To Suck An Bl0w

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