not a fan of topicals either but this was nice

restricted good flow stayed on topic the whole verse the rhyme scheme was different didnt really feal that 3 line reps it got the point across though good vocab an creativitie nicely writen everything was prety good but not much of a story line in it overall it was pretty good though should try havin a better story line though

l.i good flow of course u stayed on topic pretty hot shit vocab was nice shit the stroy line was pretty ill to me thought it was pretty creative shit an thats what i think it should be is a story line on a topical and the opener to me i think is what set up the story dont know what everyone else is sayin but overall hot verse

vote l.i

everything was pretty evenly matched i liked l.is story line better then i did restricteds 3 line sets so thats what basically got my vote

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