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Old 05-23-04, 04:03 AM   #7
FreSh_EmCee
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yo woz quite n aiight battle. sik u did aiight dawg, i woznt feeling tha flow and tha structure. lyrics were aiight but i think it woz too hard to read. remember its text so its gotta be easy to read. lyrics were aiight and punches were pretty gud man. a few hot lines in there : Ya "Reppin Tha Underground" may~be if~ya "Alive Inside Ya Coffin"
Im "Flippin Him Around" like~a FLOPPY in~ya DISC~"DRIVE DENIDE Ya Stoppin" that woz ma fav line. but i think u stretched ya lines a bit too long too. swizz ur verse woz aiight too. bit stronger punches and ya verse woz easier to read. it woz quite close but im a give it to swizz coz i thought it woz easier to read and tha flow woz a lot better.
vote = swizz

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