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Old 05-23-04, 08:48 AM   #20
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My "Lines" So Far Up Your Ass You Could Put Ya thong over your head-
Go To The Future N' Murder You So You Gettin Killed Before You Dead-
7...gud opener, a nice meta and some gud wordplay!!
Ya Lyrics Are Trash Gettin Swept Up Quick Like the High School Janitor-
Ya Moms A Hoe She Gives Bad Head Dat why President Bush mad-at-her-
6...average punch but again some gud wordplay.
Smash Ya Teeth In Da Pavement Got you speakin Giberish Like Cavemen-
You Aint Hard! I Saw You Yesterday In A porn shop lookin At Gay Men-
8...funny shit, second line was hott killa!!
Even If You Threw Ya Lines On a Mine You Still Couldn't "Blow Up"-
Leave U with pains in ya stomache Runnin Like IM BOUT TO THROW UP!-
6...pretty played but u keepin wit the gud wordplay.
U Aint Got No Education Like Kanye West's CD U A HighSchool Dropout-
Like Ali Back In Da 80's Rumblin Agenst Me U Quick To Get Knocked Out-
7...nice punch, but aint kanye's album "College Dropout".
Even If You Was Sick Eatin AlPhaBets You Still Couldn't Spit Ill Words-
Like A Foo Rappin When The Mics Turned Off Bitch You Aint Heard!-
6...nice punch i guess but u can do better.
The Only Heater You Packin Is The One That Came With Your House-
If U was infron of dairy You Still Cudnt pack "cheese" Like a blind mouse-
6...another basic type of punch.
Like A Black Person Misbehavin in da slave days Im Leavin You Hanged-
Spittin Missles Like Da World Trade Center You Goin Out With A BANG!-
8...nice closer, some good wordplay and a nice meta.


killah...ill inflict more pain on ya spits than droppin a crane on ya fists//
aimed and you missed, and u got no shine like that fake jacob on ya wrist//
7...gud opener, a strong punch with a nice multi.
straight mangle ya shit.....twist and tangle this bitch//
i'll cover all areas.....so you dont got an angle to spit//
6...nice multi again but average wordplay.
killah beat and sprayed...you know i pack heat for days//
leg shots'll have you "sea walking" like ya feet had waves//*
7...strong punch, u got them multis goin gud.
you must have your shoestrings tied together for battlin me..cuz you trippin//
shit you don't flow...you just drippin and ya hopes of winnin are slippin//
7...basic punch but the multi was good yet again.
my rhymes hit ya dome so hard that you cant even hold-in-the-pain//
this verse fucked wit ya mind like ecstacy cuz it left holes-in-ya-brain//
7...another gud punch consistent!!
i'll make you lack teeth as im dismantling this wack beef//
cant touch me it must be your rusty after Losin to Black Thief//
6...basic punch, and i used that black thief thing b4 u!!
in this battle u been adressed with damage..your text i'll banish//
and you could never "see" me even if you said yes in spanish//**
6...pretty basic again.
sicks and stones may break my bones but your lines wont even scratch me//
cuz the only "sticks and stones" you play wit are the ones inside ya panties//
8...funny as shit!! nice hott closer!!

POINTS TOTALS

Killah Bwoy - 54/80
Flow Intelligent - 54/80

Ok for punches i got u evenly matched so it goes to flow and structure. overall killah took this cuz his structure was better with all his lines the same length, flow ures changed lengths quite often therefore fuckin up ure flow for me. i think a gud strucutre means a better flow so killah takes this and therefore takes the battle only just tho.

V/ - Killah Bwoy
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