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Old 05-23-04, 09:28 AM   #23
t-storm
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tay-ur verse r really complex...u have multies...sum crazy metas....
gud wordplay....
only thing wit u though dawg....is ur structure is hard to follow....n that counts a lot in a text battle...coz i found myself havin 2 read ya linez twice to get tha punch....u need structure that people can follow coz it ruins ya flow.

i also think ur punches are 2 weak

‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!//
No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!!

i mean thats a great beta n very creative..but u cnt hit cats wit shit bout cake-fights!
i mean it makes sense..but u gotta cum harder..its a battle!


n-sight...ur structure woz more basic..but thats all thats needed it flowed well.
punches maybe wernt as creative as tay`s but they hit a lot harder

like this
How the fuck you gettin' votes speakin' jibberish..bitch, you are illiterate..-
Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..- gud punch


basically n-sight takes this on punches n personals..also he had beta flow
creativity n metas/multies goes to tay.......
but its a battle n punches n personals r wot count
n-sight jus keep bringin it like that
tay-cum harder n u`ll b a sick mc

my vote n-sight...