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Old 05-23-04, 09:35 AM   #10
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ex nyce - okay....your verse was jus like ur opener....the concept was there....but delivery was not....so work on ur wordplay.....and elevate ur meta's......punches were okay but woulda been better with a delivery.....give ur verse a 5/10......

king solo - now u had a better verse.....better wordplay and complexity.....didnt feel the cookie monster line....but the punch bout rookies was good.....better meta's......better delivery......good spit.....6.6/10......

vote - king solo
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