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Old 05-23-04, 10:08 AM   #9
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both put out some hot shit

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U stayed consistent throughout ure spit and u delivered some perfect imagery throughout. ure flow was on from start to finish and that thing u did startin each 3 lines the same was nice and creative. u had some very nice wordplay in ure spit with some nice rhymin and overall i cudn't really find anything that was seriously wrong with ure verse.
Overall 9/10

L.I.
u went with the story tellin which i liked and u had ure flow goin throughout ure verse. from beginning to end i was feelin ure verse and u had some nice wordplay in there to. i think every line was gud although ure openin was pretty weak compared to the rest of ure verse but it didn't kill it. Overall i say that u were the better because in topicals i prefer the storytellin to imagery and u manage to pull it off superbyl time and time again.
Overall 9.5/10

V/ - L.I.
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