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Old 05-23-04, 11:09 AM   #4
LyricalMethod
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thug nation terrible verse. boaty nice flow. step it up though. incorporated harder hittin punches. thug nation your verse has a ncie structure but you need to add more lyrics and better punches to your floe. boaty i like the r.kelly line yo it was nice for anewbie. thug nation steo it up. much love to both of you, keep elavatin.

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