The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
This was a pretty close battle... I think that Sik had a good flow, and a couple of his punches were pretty good, but I know I;ve heard that Put words in ya mouf line before... I think swizz had more original punchlines in his verse but it didn't flow as nice, his structure however was better. Ima have to break it down between each of your best bars....
Ya "Reppin Tha Underground" may~be if~ya "Alive Inside Ya Coffin"
Im "Flippin Him Around" like~a FLOPPY in~ya DISC~"DRIVE DENIDE Ya Stoppin"
Wordplay = 9
Punchline = 8- It was good
Creativity = The first line kinda kills this cuz its not the most original concept but I give a 7
Structure= 7- Not bad but the second line kinda stretches
I Got This Kid Prayin To Get A Vote More Than Priests Do....
GOODLUCK Sik..But This IS Gonna Be Ya First Lost Since Ya Debut..
Wordplay = n/a
Punchline = 7- It was good but not great
Creativity = Nothin amazing here, decent flow and all but no new concepts, a little personal in there so Ima give it a 7
Structure= 7- Not bad but the second line kinda stretches also
After looking through both verses again I think that Sik had harder hitting punchlines he had more wordplay in it and I just liked the verse overall more... Vote Sik... Good battle yall good luck in the future.
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