View Single Post
Old 05-23-04, 04:39 PM   #36
shadow
bingo!
 
shadow's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,024
From: holdin down the three-one-three
IP:

I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most…
Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored
See I would only have to use the minimum lines
To make impacts…
An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines
Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me
I love the hype…
Cos when net-thugs get busy it`s time to knock `em Casually
Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms
Leave scripts scorched…
It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs.
^^ casual, that was garbage structure
i guess that was your verse lmao wack man
your capable of better your shit didnt even rhyme lmao
ur structure was really bad and made your not ryhming verse worse
keep elevatin overall *6*---- not bad- not god either
----------------------------------------------------------------
deadly vision:
your shit made way more sense structure was good and good line
yiou kept it flowin well but your stuill capable of better
bestline:Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function..
Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin..
DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality..
In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty..
that was more than 4 lines but overall it was good i liked that part after that your verse fell downhill
my vote: deadly vision
__________________
Send a message via AIM to shadow