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 breakdown for L.I.:
 flow:worked alright no problems with it 7/10
 
 volcab:good not the best i've seen though 6/10
 
 punches:some good lines i thought you got pretty personal for some of them my fav,"Nah your not the best, show gratitude, who cares if you’re a text god, we all atheists…" good job here 8/10
 
 overall:21/30
 
 breakdown for native:
 
 flow:my only problem was how short it was this was working well 8/10
 
 punches:my fav line,"That L.I. is only hot.... due to global warming"  didn't like the feeding off his verse i'm gonna let it slid cause it was only one line but still 8/10
 
 volcab:good enough to get the point across nothing to special though 7/10
 
 overall:23/30
 
 vote--native gets my vote his flow was working better and with the two of you on par with punches flow decided this
 
				__________________win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
 
 
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