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Old 05-23-04, 05:26 PM   #9
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for iwillripyou:

flow:choppy worked in spots but the unbalanced bars really wrecked this 4/10

volcab:average nothing to say 6/10

punches:my fav,"be like abusive locksmiths and beat your ass with a key" pretty good job at staying on the topic was rippin on your oppenent 7/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for will s. unyu:

flow:working better then your oppenent but still room for improvment 6/10

volcab:average nothing to say 6/10

punches: fav line,"He acts tuff, but couldnt talk bold with the [b][b] code/" new idea there i liked your lines orginal for the most part 7/10

overall:19/30

vote--will s unyu
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league