i changed my title !!
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breakdown for iwillripyou:
flow:choppy worked in spots but the unbalanced bars really wrecked this 4/10
volcab:average nothing to say 6/10
punches:my fav,"be like abusive locksmiths and beat your ass with a key" pretty good job at staying on the topic was rippin on your oppenent 7/10
overall:17/30
breakdown for will s. unyu:
flow:working better then your oppenent but still room for improvment 6/10
volcab:average nothing to say 6/10
punches: fav line,"He acts tuff, but couldnt talk bold with the [b][b] code/" new idea there i liked your lines orginal for the most part 7/10
overall:19/30
vote--will s unyu
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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