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 breakdown for iwillripyou:
 flow:choppy worked in spots but the unbalanced bars really wrecked this 4/10
 
 volcab:average nothing to say 6/10
 
 punches:my fav,"be like abusive locksmiths and beat your ass with a key" pretty good job at staying on the topic was rippin on your oppenent 7/10
 
 overall:17/30
 
 breakdown for will s. unyu:
 
 flow:working better then your oppenent but still room for improvment 6/10
 
 volcab:average nothing to say 6/10
 
 punches: fav line,"He acts tuff, but couldnt talk bold with the [b][b] code/" new idea there i liked your lines orginal for the most part 7/10
 
 overall:19/30
 
 vote--will s unyu
 
				__________________win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
 
 
 and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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