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Old 05-23-04, 05:38 PM   #7
Lyriclesolja
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AAight..

$ik-that was a bad verse man none of it made cence, but you did have good vocab.
and work on your set up and flow alot more..

NY-that was an aaight verse man good set up but very few punches, you made it all come togeather in a few lines, but now try to add some metas. and use more than two rhymin words..

V/NY

aaight i did it for you now you do it for me PLEASE DONT SLEEP ON DIS.. its on me
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