deleon what the fuck is wrong with you?
why did you bla bla bla evrything
i shouldnt even have to explain this
overall i give your verse a 3
work on ur structure
work on evrything
u dint even try
so k-trin showed you up
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k-trin
I'm not mean,I just dislike faggots who got nutin but a dream/
Thinking they can make the team,bitch go back to molesting teens/
^^^ best line overall
on ur verse i give you a *6*
worstline:
Yo,u stole my rookie award,but after I win,my happiness will be restored/
I'll merk you so bad,your dick will be able to bent like a spinal cord/
not munch sense it didnt make sense
bad opener but it loks as though you beat the rookie of the year
my vote k-trin

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