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Old 05-23-04, 08:38 PM   #14
LaTiNKiTTeN
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toxic...u concentrated WAYYYYYYYY too much on multies......n they were extremely forced..to the point where some didnt make sense,or if it did it was way out there......u needa concentrate on punches more.......a whole lot more......

looch...damn,liked all ur punches except ur closing line.....my fave line was the foot notes one .....good shit......u got some very clever original punches son........

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