ok break down

quence ya opener umm started off with goodword play then the punchs was weak tha death thirs and 40 calibers was tight punch was weak though your closer again nice wordplay in the firs line but the punch was weak and the rest of your verse was basic kinda wad some nice wordplay not really any good punchs to me maybe i couple i seen was nice brah just try workin on better punchlines u got nice set ups but the punch never really hits to me got potental though just need to work on ya punchs an personals

40 cal before the pause was some sick shit an then the opener was stretched but still decent shit nice wordplay an shit your closer was ight nothin that great in there some multies and a decent punch and the rest of your verse was pretty creative metas some pretty nice punchs to but just work on your structure everything else was pretty nice

vote 40 cal

nice battle by both

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