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Old 05-23-04, 09:25 PM   #15
40CaliberHitz
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Toxic:...Nice Verse! But your multi's wasn't on POINT! Your Punchez was hot but not comapred to the hottest I've Seen out of you dawg! You need to Concentrate on your punches & be more creavtive with your ryhme sheme. But Keep Working Dawg!

Looch:..HoT Verse! Your Multi's was crazy hot! I was feeling your lyrics more & you had better ryhme scene! Your punces was crazy but ur closers need fixin dawg! Also you was very personal!


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