havok - started off wack but good metas through out....good punches....flow was nice....jus dont use "these" around your words....okay wordplay and flow....good verse....give it a 7.7/10....fav lines were....
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12

m section - another good spit....u actually had personals that hit hard.....some were gay like the banishment with out an i.....not many meta's....more complexity and creativity in ur verse....not as good a flow....give ur verse a 8/10....fav lines...
wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops…
And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock..
unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it…
At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits

vote - m section for more complexity

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