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okkk nice drops by both MC's they both stayed on target and on topic
re$tricted-nice drop on point verse on point flow and on and on point vocab verse stayed consistant in and out verse was on topic and a nice drop
start-~ I Perserve My Mind For Those Who Are To Become..
I Write To Inspire The Youth, The Future To Come..
nice start 9.5/10
middle-~ Instant Gratification, Heart Full Of Emotion and Pride..
Instant Pacification, No More Stealing, Death, Or Lies..
descentcy 9.2/10
close-~ I Have Perserved My Mind For My Son Who Has Become..
The Lyrical Prism Holder For Those Who Are To Come..
went out wit a purpose LOL 9.1/10
bestline-~Without Point-Of-Views Their Would Be No Convention..
Without Poise Our Mental Balance Would Crumble No Pervention..
nice drop 9.8/10
worsteline-none
overall yo verse stayed consistant vocab uppined yo score total and..........
9.7/10
LI-a diffrent style then Rated but your style was as consistant u stayed consitant wit yo drops and did good on your flow and nice drop also
start-~~ Comin home from work, I see my daughter’s face, its perfect…
It’s what I live for in the world, after my wife’s car wrecked…
descent 9.5/10
middle-~~ But is it worth a shot, if I fail she’ll no the truth and then she’ll hurt…
All ideas would go wrong, she trusts me, I have to tell her the blatant truth…
tite like spandex 9.6/10
close_~~ Later I found out that the doctors had brought up records and broke the news…
Said she forgives me, but I know, deep down on her heart, I left a permanent bruise…
on fiyyaaa 9.2/10
bestline-~~closer was yo best line^^^
9.2/10
worsteline-I’m the parent, I lied to my kid, she’ll never forgive me…
But what she doesn’t know cant hurt her, I’m on a lying spree…
kinda weak but 9/10
overall verse gets a 9/10
dis battle was close hard 2 choose hard 2 go by who had dis and who had dat but both of yall deserve a win nice drops both of u winner-R~~ barley tho
Posted in M.T. crew forum on 5/22... vote made on 5/23. Crew vote removed.
-strobe
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