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Old 05-23-04, 09:59 PM   #9
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aiyo Check This..

Big Norm: 4/10
You Trying That New Structure But You Failed At It, No WordPlay Really. Flow Was Alright, But You Lacked Vocab, Metaphors, and Hard Hitting Punches. I Could Care Less ABout Streched Bars As Long As you Get Your Point Across....Just Elevate and Stay Dophe.

Discharge: 6/10
You Had Sum Personals In Your Spit and Sum Hard Hitting Personals....Flow Was Alright but You Had Sum Nice WordPlay and ALright Vocabulary. Just Keep Elevating and Stay Dophe.

*PRops To BoTh*

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