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Old 05-23-04, 11:24 PM   #11
C.March
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Yo discharge got this... heres how i break it..

NOM - You had rhymes.. but some of it was pretty wack, you need to elevate.

This line was horribly stretched..and didnt rhyme with anything

beatin me......who ya think ya playin Soldiers of War permanent
to this site like ah marker cuz we plan on stayin/

Discharge - You had good flow, good punches, good structure, overall you definitely had the better verse.

Overall Discharge took this whole thing home, Nom you need to elevate, you'll be better in the long run..

Vote = Discharge