ok kid....

i dnt know bout u nips..but ma style clearly rips...dog u cnt "rhyme"/
u need wrds 2 match at the end of ya line..here..try imatating "mine"/

first off u need a heavy name, "nips" wnt cut it..try tha alias "fine-mind"/
haha...coz u sound jus like him dawg..another cat that woz "rhyme-blind"/

structure fallin apart wit all that weak "filler".seems u gona remain "unknown"/
need 2 prewrite..cum up wit sumert "iller",thats gud advice... so"go-home"/

i rip u wit a "war of words", ma shits an intoxicatin-verbal-assault/
ima spitfire..cock "my gun n serve"..so sick i lace-ya-wounds-wit-salt/

u rap like a circus clown...u prob a dickrider n wana suck "ma-falace"
..coz fukin wit ma shit..like walkin a tight rope..u aint got tha "balance"


UPIN YHIS SHIT^^^^^^^^^^^^^