T-storm whats that bout is it cuz your a storm of tears||
Back down cuz you aint gonna win lets face it its my show||
0...wtf??? didnt even fuckin rhyme dog!!!
it must be a crime to waste my time ripping a guy like you||
dog hate to break it to ya but your a a fake cuz u tryed to play thee player||
1...no rhymin, but i suppose the crime/time was a rhyme in ure first line!!!
the only thing i wanna ask is why you still bother coming here?||
with a shit rhyme and no punches your career here is over||
0...no rhyme!!!
this is gonna be an easy ko cuz man your a joke||
And im gonna leave you trumatised and paralised||
0...no fuckin rhyme!!
but why and i being so hard on you?||
becuase your a chump trying coming back in afew months time||
0...no rhyme again, that spit was fuckin bullshit!!


i dnt know bout u nips..but ma style clearly rips...dog u cnt "rhyme"/
u need wrds 2 match at the end of ya line..here..try imatating "mine"/
6...nice line rippin his verse there.
first off u need a heavy name, "nips" wnt cut it..try tha alias "fine-mind"/
haha...coz u sound jus like him dawg..another cat that woz "rhyme-blind"/
7...funny shit there!!
structure fallin apart wit all that weak "filler".seems u gona remain "unknown"/
need 2 prewrite..cum up wit sumert "iller",thats gud advice... so"go-home"/
6...nice line but basic wordplay really!!
i rip u wit a "war of words", ma shits an intoxicatin-verbal-assault/
ima spitfire..cock "my gun n serve"..so sick i lace-ya-wounds-wit-salt/
8...nice line, gud multi and some nice wordplay!!
u rap like a circus clown...u prob a dickrider n wana suck "ma-falace"
..coz fukin wit ma shit..like walkin a tight rope..u aint got tha "balance"
6...nice line but again rather basic.


POINTS TOTALS

Nips - 1/50
t-storm - 33/50

V/ - who do u fuckin think???

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