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Old 05-24-04, 11:38 AM   #29
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Wil S.unyu u need yo rhyme better Scared and Porn Star


With a verse likes yours,you should've have hoped I no-showed..
This Kid Sucks,No wonder he throw Low Blows............

^^^ NO! 2/10

You was wack from birth,Meaning you was born scarred....
So watch me Smash this Pussy,Like an Overweight Porn Star!...

Scarred Or Scared? u Reali did not rhyme 4/10

You wack as fuck....and your rhymes are NOT sick!.
So fuck you,and that guy who was quick to hope on your dick. (toxic)

Hope on ur did ** Correction HOP ** 5/10

Boaty thinks he's urban..but doesnt know the meaning of a dollar
So I'll smash his neck bone...just to prove he isnt Blue Collar*

^^^ Decent 6/10 ^^^

So, this is the closer,this newbie just merked this oldie
I guess I made Alliyah happy,because I just rocked the Boat-y

Very Bad Finisher.. ^^3/10

Break Down

Will S.unyu

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 5/10
37/90

Boaty


Its your first battle dog, how do you feel?
Ill have you cryin like K-Ci and JoJo, "TELL ME ITS REAL!"

Nice Opener Decent ^^^ 6/10



Battlin you is like talkin to a wall
It wont say anything back cause its too scared to talk at all

5/10

Youre not worth a good spit, hell you aint worth my time
Your rhymes aint shit and you dont seem to mind

No!!! 2/10

I just noticed something, im rhymin on you first
Dam youre a pussy, that makes rhymin on you even worse

Decent 6/10

Alright now, ill end this so you can breathe again
Now youre porbably like salt&peppa "whatta man!"

Nice Finisher 6/10

Break Down

Boaty

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 4/10
Punches 4/10

44/90

V/ BOATY
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