***Man Down***
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IP:
insidious BETTER VERSE PERIOD. nice punches and structure. nice multi's-could have been better but all in all you ripped this kid. cream maybe next time don't rap about guns just go hard at him with personals like he did. cream u need to step up lyrically and step your punches up a little too. insidious nice punches/ and great multi right here:
"this MC STINKS! but of course he earned the smell,
lesson 1, before u battle me, learn how to spell,
illiterate ppl piss me off, this guy's an MC who's lyrics won't sell,
the only way u having hot underground shit is if u rappin in hell,
vote=insidious
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"Don't put your mouth in motion before you put your mind in gear."

THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE
I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS
SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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