im new wit this spit and i aint ready to quit, im ready to up my numbers and make u eat shit/
make u eat cum, make u choke on dick, and i aint takin out ya mouth till u swallow all of it/
cause this is like a new begning for the both of us, mines my career and ur is endin like a group that broke up/

^^^ decent dawg...decent flow and rhyming..get some wordplay and betta metas

i'll piss on ya belly, jus like r. kelly, have u beggin for more, while im makin u hold my dick steady/
and u aint nuttin but a piece of cheap butt, or nigga, u a dick wit a loose nut!


^^ dats just wack...the piss line HAS TO GO

Yo,your rhymes are just plain and fake/
So,I can not free againist becuase im 100% Black and im still MADE tho/
You a bum ass nigga go read something u hooked on PHOENIX nigga/
Thats why u leave in a fucking little ass cottage/

^^ rhyming is not good..flow is jus aiight...and it's PHONICS

You can relate me to Ups because im quick to make nigga Rest,
Im puttin 2 barz in the back of you and the next 1 in to ya Chest/
My rhymes are gonna pump ya brakes like NESS off Da band/

^^ Blah..not feelin it

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both need elevation