aight meta4 im gona vote u on this battle cause u had stronger punches with a nice flow it reminded me of the rap battles i hear from big smalls wen he was maybe 18 it was flow mixed with a few punches then a solid one. insane16 some of your punches didnt make that much sense but i think you had the rhyme scheme down u jus need better punches
v/ meta4
everyone vote on this battle please i wana get it closed ill return the favor
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