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Old 05-24-04, 04:53 PM   #30
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Originally Posted by Mixxed MC 24
Wil S.unyu u need yo rhyme better Scared and Porn Star


With a verse likes yours,you should've have hoped I no-showed..
This Kid Sucks,No wonder he throw Low Blows............

^^^ NO! 2/10

You was wack from birth,Meaning you was born scarred....
So watch me Smash this Pussy,Like an Overweight Porn Star!...

Scarred Or Scared? u Reali did not rhyme 4/10

You wack as fuck....and your rhymes are NOT sick!.
So fuck you,and that guy who was quick to hope on your dick. (toxic)

Hope on ur did ** Correction HOP ** 5/10

Boaty thinks he's urban..but doesnt know the meaning of a dollar
So I'll smash his neck bone...just to prove he isnt Blue Collar*

^^^ Decent 6/10 ^^^

So, this is the closer,this newbie just merked this oldie
I guess I made Alliyah happy,because I just rocked the Boat-y

Very Bad Finisher.. ^^3/10

Break Down

Will S.unyu

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 5/10
37/90


WTF Kid?
are you fuckin dumb or retarded?
you MUST cant read
you had the dumbest break down of verse I have ever fuckin seen

first of all
did you even understand my fuckin opener
I said he suck
thats why he throw low blows
you dont fuckin get it?
*SUCK* and *LOW BLOWS*?M
and can you even read my second bar?
I didnt type scared
I typed scarred
so where in hell did you get scared from?
you damn wack ass rb relaunched newbie
scarred and star rhymes you poor waste of sperm
and how the hell are you going to make a correction to my verse when your correction was wrong to
the word was *dick* not did you idiot
and you gave the wackest punch in my verse the highest score?
and how the hell did I have a bad closer?
did you understand that??!!
Alliyah made a song called rock the boat
this kid name is boaty??
fuck you and your vote
lets get some real fuckin votes thats not from idiots liked Mixxed Mc
wasnt he the kid that got banned for biting?
I think he was
dont fuckin vote on my battles anymore if you're going to be an idiot!
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