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Old 05-24-04, 06:10 PM   #15
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Aaight..

Gip-nice flow and punches and i liked how you used more than two rhymin words......
overall nice flow..

Beggina-the name states whats tru....try to make your sentences longer...you will never win a battle wit dos short ones...

V/Gip

PLEASE drop and honest vote on the battle on my signature im one away from a win...
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