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Old 05-24-04, 06:53 PM   #9
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reddot06 owned dis battle....

Flow:
ur rhymes flowed pretty good ur structure added 2 it....

Vocab:
you have an average or a bit above average vocab alot better wording than Beggina MC...

Personals and Punchlines:
you had a couple here and there the ones u had were good (6.5 or 7/10)
i espicially liked
beggina mc i heard of you before your not to good
you try to act like something like your from the hood
that was ok... but one of ma favourite lines from u.....

Overall:
7/10

Beggina MC: u wern't dat good everthing u spit was basic

Vocab:
was below average... poor usage or your words...

Flow:
wasn't to great but your getting there........ your structure was good though so it added to your flow...

Punchlines and Personals:
u didn't really have any but w.e.
this was probubly your best line

u ready for a cap in da head i'm holdin it steady
U wanksta neva shot no one so why u fakin?

Overall: 5/10 (some advice practice)

Winner: reddot06
because of his vocab, personals and punchlines also Beggina MC didn't stand a chance he just didn't come out strong overall...
also i thought this line alone won u dis battle

maybe its cause u got more cum in ur belly than you got in ur testicle
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