Iight HOnestly im gonna have to say Shamira won this battle she had 1 bar that was on fire^^^^^^

you bought ya verse from Master P, so put it up for resale, my lyrical content will have ya brain spinnin like Sprewells//

THe rest of the verse was good ........Now for Lyr you need to expand ur lines you make the bar 5 word it need more word that all..ya structure was ok but next time make sure not ever word in the verse is going to rhyme.....Ok battle tho

Lyr had a line i liked but was just good enough

tha all mighty flya/ smoke wat I got and it’ll get ya higha//

Vote-Sham

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