The Epitome Of Greatness
From: NY ... Born And Raised |
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IP:
breakdown:
k-trin:
Yo , Bitch You call yourself L.I. , but skill is something you'd never run by./
You been jerking off some much,your palm look like it been dipped in hand dye/
^^nice opener good punch 7/10
I bust your lip so bad that it turns red and you get mistaken for Krusty the clown/
Your mom the talk-of-the-town,cause she got on L.I. and jump up-and-down/
^^another nice punch 7/10
Why you got nothing in your profile except for that you strike fear in everyone?/
You as scary as Gary Colemon with a spray gun full of cum from L.I.'s little "bun"/
^^1st line str8 2nd line was ok but the ending was gay 5/10
You could be Niaguria,but I'd be Angel,you could be Obie,but I'd be Eminem/
U the biggest peice of shit to come out of a clit since the song 'AM to PM"/
^^your worst line probably 2/10
Ur like Matin Luther King but ain't got no dream,you like a wrestler without a ring/
U a dick urself,you masterbate by wrapping your hands around urself and rubbing/
^^1st line good 2nd line bad 4/10
U like to act big,but you small in many ways,for u,this must suck so bad/
You bout to die,date's today,and ya got a desease,it called "I fucked dad"/
^^crappy finisher 3/10
overall: 28/60
L.I:
Little hesitant, i understand, i'd be be scared against me too...
Quit battlin, since instrumentals have better lines than you...
^^lmfao hott opener 9/10
Acts like he won the award for best rookie, all he does is boast...
And when it came down to decisions, your wack ass got 0 votes...
^^hott bar good personal 7/10
Beating LoT, than king solo, finally me...this herbs absurd...
Already realized hes wack, thats why he has his name blurred...
^^lol another hott personal 7/10
His whole aspect in this is questionable, why did he even decide to rap...
And whats with his sig, didnt know Em needed help to be put on the map...
^^str8 bar 5/10
Remember this, you need skill to win an award, and you have none...
Tried to convince you were sick, but in the end you were just shunned...
^^good personal but wack closer 5/10
overall: 35/50
vote: L.I
i think both verses started strong but got weaker towards the end...L.I definately won this with the hott personals werent many punches but the flow structure and personals made up for that...k-trin you had a straight verse but i think you should stick to front lines for a little while and elveate some more before you come back to EFL and challenge a vet...<<just my opinion no beef
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