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daclassic: 
 
It's going to take a little magic,There's no hocus pocus 
I'm bout to make this Deadlyvision get his eyez focused 
^^hott opener good punch 7/10 
You steady thinking and typing a verse you thinking of biting 
No biting, Don't take me as a peace a cake when you writing 
^^lolgood meta but bad punch 5/10 
Lyric incision coming through you as sharp as a cleat be 
Even if you cut my legs off, You still couldn't defeat me 
^^defeat me lines are played no respect for that 0/10 
he's not even close to lyrical, bragging that he a miracle 
I'm a have this dude retire from rapping to being spiritual 
^^good wordplay strong punch 7/10 
I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote 
If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope 
^^another good punch hott closer 8/10 
 
overall: 27/50 (54%) 
 
deadlyvision: 
 
^^Kid 1st ur punches are like female hits they all sound whack/ 
How u claiming ur tough? is like mannequins it's all a fake act/.. 
Kid face it i'ma above u, skill is what u lack, Put uneven #'s in ur head to show how the odds are stacked/.. 
^^hott opener good wordplay and metas bad structure 7/10 
Bitch I punch ya line and ya 4s-been-met....steping up 2 Me u get smacked da way bitches-get-checked/.. 
Only time dis kid fly is up in a bird nest, My punches will leave ur organs by ur heart now he really 'Up-Set'/.. 
IQ of a Genius?? I leave ya mental capacity in catastrophy, squeezin ya brain an slam ya head,I've damned-ur-cred/ 
^^good bar nice shyt but structure once again is off but still hott 7/10 
Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/.. 
Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/.. 
^^lmfao hott shyt here 8/10 
It's like im throwin stones at At "blueprint", cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"/.. 
Classic? I Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"/.. 
^^dam hott finisher best bar 10/10 
 
overall: 32/40 
 
vote: DV...overall better verse and the last 2 bars ended it 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
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