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Old 05-24-04, 11:25 PM   #4
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breakdown:

daclassic:

It's going to take a little magic,There's no hocus pocus
I'm bout to make this Deadlyvision get his eyez focused
^^hott opener good punch 7/10
You steady thinking and typing a verse you thinking of biting
No biting, Don't take me as a peace a cake when you writing
^^lolgood meta but bad punch 5/10
Lyric incision coming through you as sharp as a cleat be
Even if you cut my legs off, You still couldn't defeat me
^^defeat me lines are played no respect for that 0/10
he's not even close to lyrical, bragging that he a miracle
I'm a have this dude retire from rapping to being spiritual
^^good wordplay strong punch 7/10
I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote
If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope
^^another good punch hott closer 8/10

overall: 27/50 (54%)

deadlyvision:

^^Kid 1st ur punches are like female hits they all sound whack/
How u claiming ur tough? is like mannequins it's all a fake act/..
Kid face it i'ma above u, skill is what u lack, Put uneven #'s in ur head to show how the odds are stacked/..
^^hott opener good wordplay and metas bad structure 7/10
Bitch I punch ya line and ya 4s-been-met....steping up 2 Me u get smacked da way bitches-get-checked/..
Only time dis kid fly is up in a bird nest, My punches will leave ur organs by ur heart now he really 'Up-Set'/..
IQ of a Genius?? I leave ya mental capacity in catastrophy, squeezin ya brain an slam ya head,I've damned-ur-cred/
^^good bar nice shyt but structure once again is off but still hott 7/10
Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/..
Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/..
^^lmfao hott shyt here 8/10
It's like im throwin stones at At "blueprint", cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"/..
Classic? I Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"/..
^^dam hott finisher best bar 10/10

overall: 32/40

vote: DV...overall better verse and the last 2 bars ended it
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