b20
Thiz guyz scriptz show hez a minister ov the weak
If ya listen hiz lyricz even practice what he preach..
Nice wordplay- this punchline was a good opener.
Ya namez not unique nor does it fit ya quit right..
Cuz Myers is the only known 'Murderous Mic'..
Decent
Tryna make money from rap but ya get humiliated..
So to support ya family ya cuz got smart n graduated..!!
Decent
I'ma stated role model...I see ya really look up to B..
I mean ya accepted my challenge to get close to me..!!
I liked this line a little more than the previous two, the whole bar snapped.
Fukk M-I-C ya simply Missin Ill Context..
Writin can't profit you like fillin out hot checkz..!!
Good closer, again good wordplay into the punch.

Murderous Mic
Its b2o's First Battle I Guess I Should Be Ready To Merk....
This b2o's Lines Wouldnt Be Any Shorter If His Rhymes Were A Damn Mini-Skirt......*
Decent, not great for an opener though.
I'll Be The First To Tell Yall.....This Kid Has No Game.....
He Has A Whack Verse....And Noone Knows The Meaning To His Name.....
This was good, better than the first bar- a little personal insult.
This Kid Gets Hanged....Even More Times Than I Hang "Hangers"
This Kid "Taps" More Senior Citizens......Then Damn GanG "BANGERS"....**
Egh, you coulda used more vocab - in the first line you said Hang 3 times, and Gang Bangers and Senior Citizens dont reference well in the punch which woulda been necessary to give the taps a solid foundation, otherwise its missed.
Im Gonna Slice His Body Lyrically.......More Times Than Butchers Slashin Meat....
B2o's Rhymes Is incomplete I Told Him To Talk To The Hand....And The Bitch Tried To Rape My FEET......***
I don't really feel this, your structure got a little off, and it just wasn't as good as I've seen you come before...

This Is My Closing....I End It With A Good-Bye But You Got Merked......
I Told Him My Rhymes Were "INSANE" He Tried To Copy Me And He Went Beserk.....
This was better, not a new concept or anything but its wordplay... All in all I think b20's lines had alot higher tendency to land and I think you just must've had an off day cuz Ive seen you come nicer than this before. Im not sure if Ive ever even voted against you before but I think this time B20 earned the V, so theres my vote... please return the fav with an honest one... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125808

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