Man it’s sad, a whole verse with no personal in it
And you trying to pass it off like a work of 5 minutes
Clear to the rest of us though, shit’s pre-written
Drop my name once or twice… just so we don’t think them lines bitten

^^ nice personal..shit is tru..good

We could rematch forever, I know it’s an idea you dread
Cuz like an uneven coin I always come up ahead
I mean shit, it’s clear I’m battling a square this time…
Because this kid got matched by a shadow with just 4 lines….

^^ good closer

Its ok if my earlier post bout Iraq, got yo whole mentallity pissed
the way im Spittin Now, i deserve to be "Grindin" wit Clipse
don be mad cus youll never win, im jus a kid wit a gift
this aint a battle its n assault, your tomb gonna read too Dissed to be missed


^^^ I am not feeling this structure...the rhyming is not good

up complexity of punches


Vote: Shadow...better verse.period.